Monday, February 7, 2011

Sorrow...(Three line poem)

Sorrow stares at people in the middle of Downtown
Wearing blue tear drops
She tears her clothes and becomes one of the crowd

1 comment:

  1. Dear Jin Young, I really like the image you crafted in this three line poem. I can see SORROW as a tall slender woman dressed in blue almost like a statue until she comes to life and tears off her clothes to join humanity. My advice to you is to keep writing. I can't wait to see what you will come up with next! How exciting that you are "pitching" your guts!

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